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aap sabh da shukria g.........:)!
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05 Mar 2012
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ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਖੂਬਸੂਰਤ ਰਚਨਾ,,,ਜੀਓ,,,
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05 Mar 2012
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shukria harpinder g honsla afjayi lyi........@mavi g tuhada is tra likhna chnga lgea kyuki j insaan apey aap ch smjhe jk sabh kuch anda hai m nu taan othe usda vikaas hona ruk janda a ,hankaar aa janda a ,tuhada ih likhna k ahey m nu kuch nhi anda...................... ih sabh nimanepaan hai ........ bt seriously jdo v m sochdi haan k hun m kehdi help lwa te tuhada name hi sabh taun pehla anda hai........:)!
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05 Mar 2012
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Nice one... With utmost respect I disagree with Mavi ji and will say that the last shaer is full of meaning and actually I liked it the most.
ਮੈਂ ਹਾਂ ਵਾਂਗ ਭੱਦੇ ਰੰਗਾਂ ਦੇ ਜੋ ਅੱਖਾਂ ਵਿੱਚ ਰੜਕੇ,
ਜੋ ਕਿਸੇ ਸੋਹਣੇਪਣ ਦੇ ਕਦੇ ਮੋਹਤਾਜ ਨਹੀਂ ਰਹੇ ।
It's like, you can love me or hate me but you can never forget me :-)
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05 Mar 2012
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sohne jazbaat.....bahut khoob ji...keep writing
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06 Mar 2012
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thnku g sarea da apne apne vichaar dein lyi........:)
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06 Mar 2012
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bahut khoob ,,, ghat lines wich bhaut kujh byan kar ditta tusi,, thanks for sharing ,, likhde raho te share karde raho continue,,,,
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07 Mar 2012
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ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਵਧੀਆ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਰਾਜਵਿੰਦਰ .........ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਕਮਾਲ ਦੇ ਅਹਿਸਾਸ ਸਾਂਝੇ ਕੀਤੇ ਨੇ ......ਹੋਰ ਲਿਖੋ ਤੇ ਸਾਂਝਿਆ ਕਰਦੇ ਰਹੋ ......ਸ਼ੁਭ ਇਛਾ
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08 Mar 2012
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shukria g sarea da ........ jroor g m hor chnga likhan di koshish krangi....
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09 Mar 2012
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