Pardeep ji, Mavi ji, Hardeep ji aap sabh da bahut bahut shukriyaa.
ih asal vich sach hai kavita aap hi apne aap nu likh jaandi hai..... bahut vaar hunda hai ke soch ke likhan di koshis karda haan par kade kheyaal nahi aaunde te kade shabadaa daa akaal pai janda hai.... par jad kavita ne futna hunda hai taan pata hi nahi lagda... ih lavita main 5-10 minutes vich likhi hai... te kade kade ghanteya banni baithan naal ik lafz nahi likheya janda
I have seen such an intense improvement in your writings... time de naal bahut zyada fark hai... je hale vi tuhadian old creations read karaa te lagda nai its same person here...