beautifully written...... kithe luke rehne ho ajj kall janab ???

te sach tuhadi poem da title set karta.... mainu laggda notice kar leya hona.... :)

Ah!!

kyaa baat hai,janaab;kite dhur andar ton phuttia hai ih chashma raagini da kih noor lafz ho gayaa,te qalam ne bansuri chherhii.

mausamaan de vi asar hai,shaayd,kih dhartii maul rahii hai;rnag-ba-rang da saaloo pehn rahe ne pairh;naviyaan kurumblaan da mausam;

vo baad-e-sabaa aayii hai ab

khushboo ko chhupaaye aanchal men

rangdaar suneha phoolon ka

ai shaayar qalam sambhaal zaraa

khaamaa-farsaayii ho jaaye

uth aur samet le lafzon ko

ik nazm mo'attar ho jaaye

bahut khoobsoorat te hasaas rachna

injh hi likhade raho

Jujhar ji, Kuljit ji, Rajwinder ji, Ammi ate Charanjit ji aap sabh da bahut bahut shukriaaa...

@Charanjit tuhadiaa lines vi bahur khoob han, hausla afzai layee shukriaa....

@Ammi jana kithe, ithe hi America vich haan, aa ja kise din ithe tainu America ghumma dinde haan