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ਵਾਹ ਬਾਈ ਜੀ ਸੱਚੀਂ ਰੂਹ ਖੁਸ਼ ਹੋ ਗਈ ਪੜਕੇ...
ਸਾਰੀਆਂ ਸਤਰਾਂ ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਜਿਆਦਾ ਪਿਆਰੀਆਂ ਨੇ...ਅਖੀਰਲੀਆਂ ਸਤਰਾਂ ਚ੍ ਤਾਂ ਦਿਲ ਕੱਢਕੇ ਰੱਖਤਾ ਤੁਸੀਂ....ਜਿਉਂਦੇ ਰਹੋ ਬਾਬਿਓ |
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22 Apr 2012
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bahut vadia veer ji ,sachi vaar vaar padan nu dil karda
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23 Apr 2012
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Nimar, gulvir te charnjit ji bht bht shukria ji . . . Jio
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23 Apr 2012
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Kuljit te harman 22 ji shukria tavajjo den lyi . .
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23 Apr 2012
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hatts off...
ik-ik line bahut hi jyada khoobsurat hai,,,,superbbbb creation....!!
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24 Apr 2012
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Thank u seerat ji . . . Khush rho
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25 Apr 2012
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fantastic work veer ji...
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26 Apr 2012
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kya baat ae bai ji........
i could sing it along with reading..... bahut wadhiya rhythm ch shabdaaN naal bakhoobi piro ke likheya.... daad kabool karo....
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26 Apr 2012
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bahut hi khoobsurat likheya ji...last two lines r awesm..tfs..!!
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27 Apr 2012
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