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bahut hi hasaas te thoughful nazm
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06 Feb 2012
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thanks pardeep veer... tusi sahi keha othe stayi hi ayega oh galti naal sati likhya gya... dhyaan nal padan lyi shukariya..
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15 Feb 2012
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bahut hi lajawaab likheya veer ji..saari rachna bahut hi kmaal hai,,,,,great work.
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17 Feb 2012
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thanks veer... kmaal di gall eh hai k eh poem v main bus ch likhi hai...
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22 Feb 2012
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bahut khoob....
Harinder ji, I am huge fan of your writings.... amazing creations and all top notches ....
great going !!!
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22 Feb 2012
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Wahhh Brar Saahab kya baat hai..bahut hi lajawaab likheya...tfs..
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22 Feb 2012
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bahut vadiyaa likheya tussi veer ji .kuch eho jehiyan gallan jo har ek de jehan vich nahi aondiya ,tuhadiya ehna 10-12 lines ne poori ਜਿੰਦਗੀ di kahani
ਬਿਆਨ kar ditti .oh ਜਿੰਦਗੀ jo kisse mohabbat ja bewafai to alag hai kuch hor ਮੁੱਦੇ jinna bare appan bahut ghat sochde han .ਬਹੁਤ ਖੂਬ
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29 Mar 2012
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