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ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧੀਆ ਜੀ !!
ਰੱਬ ਤੁਹਾਡੀ ਇਸ ਕਲਾ ਨੂ ਹਮੇਸ਼ਾ ਚੜ੍ਦੀ ਕਲਾ ਚ ਰੱਖੇ !
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19 Jan 2011
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very nice jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii keep it up
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21 Jan 2011
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simple n sweet..!!
bahut hi sohna likheya Nimar ,,mere vallo ve ehi dua hai k eh saal sabh lyi khushiyan lai k aave...
thankx for sharing,,god bless u
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25 Jan 2011
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nice one... naven saal te navan suneha,...
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25 Jan 2011
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realy awsm nimar 22 ji...... ik likhat ch ena kuj likh ditta k bhte visheaan te likhan d jroorat hi nahin reh gyi............... share karn lyi bht bht shukriaa wadde veer.................
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25 Jan 2011
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bahut-bahut Mehrbani Aap Sabh ji
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26 Jan 2011
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main reh gya c bai....bahut khoobsurti naal likheya,,,,jionde raho
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23 Feb 2011
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read ur pom veer ji ... nice pom but in all pom u was hoping to happen something but suddenly a question broke the rythym of pom (deeyan jaman waley than tay kyioun nahin mar janday). hope to read more from u ...
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01 Mar 2011
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| Nimar |
@ jaspreet :: bai ji lgda tusi poem dhayan naal nahi padhi...kuch glti reh gyi tuhade padhan vich..main dheeyan kukh ch maaran valeya nu fitkareya hai na ke dheeyan jamman valeya nu...plz chck........thankx
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04 Mar 2011
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