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Honhaar mitro aina maan den lyi shukaria
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25 Jan 2011
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hatts off to you..!!
ultimate creation...every single line is awesome,,god bless you.
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27 Jan 2011
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sry minder main read ta phila vi kiti si par kise vjah reply nhi kr hoia .....
bahut khoob veer ........bless u ..........ise trah likhde rho
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27 Jan 2011
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Avrooz ji meharbaani ji
jass 22 ji jaa taan sorry keh lo jaa veer keh lo?
Shukaria ji.
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29 Jan 2011
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hatts off to you..!!
hamesha vaang bahut hi lajawab likheya...har ik likhat vich aini khoobsurti , sanjeedgi apne aap ch ik bahut vadhe writer di nishani hai... Great work
best of luck..!!
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06 Feb 2011
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bilkul sira..!!
bahut ghaint likheya veer,,mere kol koi shabd nhi han..jionde vassde raho
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08 Feb 2011
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| jiyo babeyo |
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gurminder veer ji bahut hi lasani rachna hai tuhadi...main poora yakeen hai k ik din tuhada punjabi sahit vich bahut vadhha naam hoyega.,,rabb ese tra rehmta banayi rakhhe...jionde vassde raho
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08 Feb 2011
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Ashveen , rajbir te naman 22g bahut bahut shukaria apne keemti vichar dasn lyi pr 22 aapa taan aje likhna sikhde haan.
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09 Feb 2011
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ਵਧੀਆ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਹੈ ਗੁਰਮਿੰਦਰ ! ਪਰ ਤੁਹਾਡੀ ਰਚਨਾ ਚਾਰ ਪੈਰਿਆਂ ਚ ਮੁੱਕਦੀ ਹੈ ..ਸੋ ਹਰ ਪੈਰੇ ਦੀ ਪੰਜਵੀਂ ਸਤਰ "ਖੁਦਗਰਜ਼ਾਂ ਦੀ ਮੰਡੀ ਦੇ ਵਿਚ" ...ਲਿਖਣ ਦੀ ਕੋਈ ਖਾਸ ਜ਼ਰੂਰਤ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ ! ਗੁੱਡ ਵਰਕ !
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11 Apr 2011
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Shukaria divroop veer ji apne vichaar den lyi . Mai agge to dhiyaan rakhanga.
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13 Apr 2011
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