Good one Harpinder ji....

And last 2-lines turned out to be concluding lines.... jo mainu personally bahut pasand hai. As if last dian lines sari rachna da saar hon.

Beautiful attempt and well written !!!

ਮਾਣ ਬਖਸ਼ਣ ਲਈ ਬਹੁਤ ਬਹੁਤ ਧੰਨਵਾਦ ਕੁਲਜੀਤ ਜੀ,,,ਜਿਓੰਦੇ ਵੱਸਦੇ ਰਹੋ,,,