bahut vadiyaa 22ji .hun dasoo tuse kinaa changa likhde hoon . rab ne tuhanu kinaa pyaar ditaa hai . par mainu kikhna nahi aundaa . te main koshish karanga ki main vi vadiyaan likhaan .

thanx Manu ! And ofcourse u can write very well ! But you just need to spend some more time in the library & read some diff poets ! Thats the biggest secret bro ..Wink :) ! Jeeyo..

u r approaaching Shiv in these lines........sachi .........bahaut vadiya laggi......der aaye darusat aaye.....mein ajj hee dekhi:P

thanx for sharing

Mashala ! Eh ta tuhada vaddapn hai Aman ji ! Es layk ta bilkul vi nahi ..haan baki haunsle zaroor buland ne , you never know :) ! Dilon shukria kardan tuhada...God bless you !! 

Very Beautiful ! :)

bahaut vadiya sandhu saab

embrace nu galvakdi kehnde in pnjabi i guess 

bhul-chuk maafi.........thanx for sharing.......

sach very happy  birthday to u just visited the profile page te pta chaleya ajj aap ji da janamdin aa........rabb hr maidan fateh bakshe.......hasde vasde raho