kudiye tu tan inna sohna likh laindi hain, mainu idea nae c. really boh sohni likhi hai kavita.

sorry main late padi. actually jassi job ch time nae laga. kae kavitavan kal padian c,eh pata nae kidan reh gayi.asal ch bahute gharan da parauana bhukha reh jaanda. jado time lagda pehla punjabizm on kar laindi haan ,naal he mails te,naal he janta koi na koi chat te hundi hai,kadi pb phone laga hunda, mainu lagda mere ese rauley ch innni  WADHIA KAVITA PADAN  to reh gayi.

jassi kini bariki naal feel kar k likhi gayi hai.poem pad k ek young to old age tak paunchey paatar da chitran aakhan sahmney hunda hai.

jassi hun tu v amrinder ji d category ch aa gayi AWESOME wali.

boh sohni likhi hai indocanadian nu send kar,badi pasand auogi sarean nu.hor v koi likhi hai poem,share karin asha.

thanx jassi

ਸਾਡੀ ਜਵਾਨੀ ਵੀ ਬੀਤ ਗਈ ਖੇਤਾਂ 'ਚ ਹੀ........
ਤੇ ਉਨਾਂ ਖੇਤਾਂ ਦੀ ਛਤਰਛਾਇਆ ਹੇਠ
ਸਾਡਾ ਟੱਬਰ ਵੀ ਵਕਤ ਨੂੰ ਕਤਲ ਕਰਦਾ ਰਿਹਾ..........।

jassi eh lines dil nu ehdan touch kardian hun jidan pardes  beithey achanak he koi jaani pehchani mehak mehsoos hon lag pavey,jis nu fad nae sakde,dekh v nae sakde par oh mehak sadey andron kuch khaa rahi hovey. isnt it ? 

thanks didi.. 4-5 payian ethe ee..

thish ish naice..

Dobara parhan nu dil kar aya. Awesome.. Hatts of u.

thanks veer ji..

Hi Jasso ths is absolutely a master piece, loved it soooooooooooo much, each word eive lagda ke jive maali ne apni kheti cho chug chug ke apni zindagi da sab to nayab guldasta banaya hove

once again , hats off to u, ur writings.

This is  our POEM of the month

absolutely loved it

thanku didi..ur words means lottttttt

dnt hav words to express itz quality .... really awesome .. je eh rachna na dekhi hundi tan sachi kuchh tan zaroor miss ho janda ... ik kirti di zindagi da kauda sach ..ki jis boote nu oh khoon paseene naal sinjda hai ..par usda fal us di kismat ch nhi ... sarmayedari di sab to pehli paudi ... bahut umda soch .. jeonde raho rabb rakha ..

tnx ji.. smjhn lyi..