hamesha vaang....mere kol tuhadi poetry de kaabil lafz aj v nahi...

Lajawaab poetry te word combination. good work.

koi alfaaz ni bai ji....nazara ban ta :)

Shukriya Sab da,,, haunsla afzaai layi..!!

Quite heavy words, but you used them well

nice poem

Thanks ji... :)

laajvaab jii, bohut khoob

thodi gazal pad ke koi bhuli wisri yadd a gi.thanx for this 22g,bhaut wadia likhya.

very nice.. hzm nhi hoye words..but well done..

1 mahina laa ke likhi si.....eh poem.....

masaan suitable lafz mile si....  mainu urdu bahut changi laggdi.... :P