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| bahut khoob...!! |
wah bai ji bahut hi sohna likheya...tuhadiyan kahiyan gallan solan aane sachhiyan han....tuhadi eh rachna vee pehliyan rachnava vaang hi parbhaavshali hai....great job.....
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29 Nov 2010
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veer jii tuhadi koshish tareef di mohtaaz niiiiii
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29 Nov 2010
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veer jii tuhadi koshish tareef di mohtaaz niiiiii
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29 Nov 2010
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mere kehan joga tan kujh bacheya hee nahi......
saareyaN ne salaheya ae....... te hai vi bahut salahunyog rachna hai.....
awesome...!!!
keep writing bai ji...!!
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29 Nov 2010
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Unjh mera naam bhave nimar hai par sada nimar nai riha jaanda
kite bhi kujh galt dekh ke khoon khaul hi uthda ee
Bahut hi vadia likhia tusi .. God bless
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29 Nov 2010
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bahut bahut Meharbani Aap Sabh di
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29 Nov 2010
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nimar g tuahdi likhat bahut he umdaa hai..............excellent...............
ajj he savere paper ch pad rahi c k koi new born baby nu satluj dian jhadian ch sutt gaya and kise rabb de bande ne hospital admit karwaea.............
tuhadi kavita sach byan kardi hai................kinna sach likhea hai k bajurg nu aapni jawani d kami kado khatakdi hai
waheguru tuhadi likhat nu suchamta bakshde rehan
thanx
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29 Nov 2010
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bahut-bahut Meharbani hardeep ji
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29 Nov 2010
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Too good Nimar ji,
Sorry main late read kiti....
I love all the lines and flow.....
Keep going !!!
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29 Nov 2010
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bahut hi lajawaab likheya bai ji..bilkul sachhayi bharpoor rachna hai tuhadi..tusi bahut hi chintajanak mudde saahmne leyande han..
Rabb rehmta banayi rakhhe...thankx for sharing..jionde raho
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30 Nov 2010
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