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ਬਹੁਤ ਖੂਬ,,
ਲਫ਼ਜਾਂ ਚੋਂ ਮਨਫ਼ੀ ਕਰਕੇ ਉਸਨੂੰ ,ਗਜ਼ਲ ਕਿੰਖ ਲਿਖਦਿਆਂ...
ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਪਿਆਰੇ ਅਹਿਸਾਸਾਂ ਦੀ ਲੜੀ ਚ੍ ਪਰੋਈ ਹੈ ਇਹ ਲਿਖਤ...ਮਜ਼ਾ ਆ ਗਿਆ ਪੜਕੇ.....ਲਿਖਦੇ ਰਹੋ
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09 May 2011
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Bahut bahut meharbaani ji
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11 May 2011
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wah bai ji kya baat hai..swaad aa gya padke..bahut rooh naal likheya tusi....really nice sharing..jionde vassde raho veer !!
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11 May 2011
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Gurpinder te naib 22 hosla afjayi lyi meharbaani
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11 May 2011
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fantastic...
bahut pyari likhat hai tuhadi....every single line is just superbb :))
good work...thaknx for sharing
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11 May 2011
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marvellous!! veer, parmatama kare tusin injh hee likhde rahon hamesha...
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12 May 2011
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Harjinder didi ainia duaawa den lyi meharbani ji manmeet ji rachna pasand karan te time kad ke apne vichar den lyi shukaria
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12 May 2011
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| jiyo babeyo |
kamaal krti veer ji....bahut hi sohni rachna rachi hai....bde sohne te pyare ehsaas paroye han ke vaar-vaar padhan nu dil krde !! great work..
thankx for sharing here //////
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12 May 2011
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