Jass veere, don't mind. we all, except a few, are armature writers and trying to learn a little bit by reading the poems and from these discussions. This is a constructive discussion and should always be appreciated. It not only increases our vocabulary but also sometime give a hint about writer's way of thinking while writing the poem. Sometime we have seen two different point of view for the same line. I agree with Mavi Ji using new words from other languages(to an extent) should be encouraged it always makes a language wealthy. One thing which I have noticed use of Urdu and Farsi words are appreciated, but use of Hindi words is almost disliked. I couldn't rap around this thinking. No one should take it personally but lets move forwarded with a constructive thinking.

BTW aah bibi boldi nahi likhdi hai. LOL

 

LOL @ ਸ਼ਰਨਪ੍ਰੀਤ,,,ਅਸੀਂ ਤਾਂ ਪਿਆਰ ਵੰਡਣਾ ਤੇ ਕਰਨਾ ਹੀ ਸਿਖਿਆ ਹੈ ਨਫਰਤ ਨਹੀਂ ,,,hahhahah 

 

ਬਾਕੀ ਜੱਸ ਵੀਰ ਨੇਂ ਸਹੀ ਕਿਹਾ ਹੈ ਕੀ ਆਪਾਂ ਤਾਂ ਇਸ site ਤੇ ਕੁਝ ਸਿਖਣ ਲਈ ਹੀ ਆਉਂਦੇ ਹਾਂ | ਬੱਸ ਕੁਝ ਨਵਾਂ ਵੇਖਕੇ ਦੋ ਕੁ ਸਵਾਲ ਪੁਛ ਬੈਠੇ | ਗੁਸਤਾਖੀ ਮਾਫ਼ ਕਰਨੀਂ ,,,ਜਿਓੰਦੇ ਵੱਸਦੇ ਰਹੋ ,,,

 

ji bilkul sahi keha tusi and hasse mazak vich saade varge amateur newcomers nu bahut kuj sikhan nu v mil janda hai.....