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ਕੁਕਨੂਸ  ...............
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ਮੈਂ ਕਿਓਂ ਉਦਾਸ ਹਾਂ..........

ajj main bhut udaas haan....

pta nahi kyon.....

aje ta disdi hai koi koi chiri mere pind vich...

aje ta saade seeri nu ghr parteyaan 3 hi saal hoye ne.

aje ta  baaki hai guandiyaan di noonh da ro-2 k behosh hona.

t fer jaag k fir puchna.

ji roti vich ki bnavaan.

aje ta mere ghr de 4 hi hisse hoye ne..

te khetaan vicho colony hi ta nikli hai.....

 

 

aje ta meri maa ne bs satveen vaar hi kutt khaadi hai..

t mere bhra koi pehli vaar hi ta bhukha college nahi gya?

aje ta baaki hai mera daaj di tkri ch tulna.....

t roz mehne sun2 k fer bhulna.

.aje ta kiti hi hai binder chache di kuri ne b.a.

oda 45 saal de" munde" nal vyahe jana t aje baki hai.

aje ta lya hi main khud lyi ik faisla...

odi keemat taarni t aje baaki hai.

 

aje ta minu bs laashan disdiyaan ne.....

apne modheyaan de upr latkdiyaan...

supneyaan da dr k sehm jana.

t aje v baaki hai.......

aje ta hass paindi hai pammi.....

shrabi ghrvaale to pai kutt  de neel vakhaundi-2...

aje 4 vaar hi ta mere pind di jwani....

nsheyaan ne khaadi hai........

aje ta rehnda hai pchliyaan votaan da hisab kitab.....

sarpanch ne is vaar dugni shraab hi ta mangvai hai.....

 

 

aje ta main royi haan andr luk k bs kuj vr hi.....

aje ta tutte supne chubhe hn akhn ch.

aje ta main himmat vi nahi haari...

na poori hon vali hasrt de pure hon di.......

aje ta bs bechain akhaan nl main t meri maan ne.

ik duje vl hi ta tkkeya hai...

 

 

ina vi kuj khas nahi hoya...

sb sukh saand hi ta hai..

fr v.

ajj main bhut udaas haan.

pta nahi kyon.......

 

11 Oct 2010

ਇੱਕ ਕੁੜੀ ਜਿਹਦਾ ਨਾਂ ਮੁਹੱਬਤ ...
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ਸ਼ਬਦ ਨਹੀਂ ਏ ਮੇਰੇ ਕੋਲ ਇਹ ਦੱਸਣ ਲਈ ਕਿ ਇਹ ਨਜ਼ਮ ਦਿਲ ਦੇ ਧੁਰ ਅੰਦਰ ਕਿਵੇਂ ਲਹਿ ਗਈ...ਇਸ ਤੋਂ ਪਹਿਲਾਂ ਕਦੇ ਵੀ ਏਥੇ  ਕੋਈ ਨਜ਼ਮ ਪੜ੍ਹ ਕੇ ਅੱਖਾਂ ਨਮ ਨਹੀਂ ਸੀ ਹੋਈਆਂ...ਏਸ ਕਲਮ ਦੀ ਬੁਲੰਦੀ ਲਈ ਬਹੁਤ ਬਹੁਤ ਦੁਆਵਾਂ  ....

11 Oct 2010

...BLKR ...
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ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧੀਆ ਜੀ ......

11 Oct 2010

ਸਟਾਲਿਨਵੀਰ ਸਿੰਘ  ਸਿੱਧੂ
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haaye ....

 

jmaa schayi likh ditti ....

mainu ajj tuhade utte grewal saab hor v maan ho gya ....

lggda sadi sangat da asar hona shuru ho gya ...

jeaunde rho ...

keep it up ....

11 Oct 2010

hg i77
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shuruuu kiti ta pta ee ni lgga khtm kd ho gyi... schii dhurr andr tkk chheeer gyii menu tuhaadi eh soch... khudaa slaamt te niyaari rkhe jgg to is soch nu..... akaaaallllllll..........

11 Oct 2010

Harjit Pal Singh
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Bahut Bahut vadiya likhya ae ... Zindgi da  sach  likh dita tusi grewal saab... I agree... parde parde ek vaar ta idaan lagya ke sab akhaan moore ho reha ae.. bahut e vadiya.. please apni baki lekhni v site utte post karo.. mai suni ae kaafi sari..

 

please 

11 Oct 2010

SIMRAN DHIMAN
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wah ji wah kamal kr ditti tusi tan bahut hi khoobsurat tarike nal bahut kuj keh dita tusi 

11 Oct 2010

surjit singh
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lajawaab rachna hai ji....jiven kise tasveer de andar tak koi hath farh ke lai gaya hove....great job...thanx for sharing....

12 Oct 2010

ਕੁਕਨੂਸ  ...............
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bhut bhut shukriya................

minu bilkul hi aas nahi c........k minu ina vdiya hungaara milega........zrra-nvaazi lyi the dil to dhannvaad.........

 

 

 

 

 

@kaku: stalin d rees n kr tu....smjhya...:)

12 Oct 2010

Harjit Pal Singh
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Nai g mai ni kiti... mai ni kar sakda.. jo lagya o keh dita.. han bas grewal saab zrur keha c... ha ha ha.. baki sach bahut vadiya likhya ae.. mere te ykin nahi ta baki friends te ta houga e ....!  kkh 

12 Oct 2010

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