its ultimate creation..!! bahut hi parbhaavshali likheya..tuhadi eh rachna ajj de nirdayi samaaj te bahut katakash kardi hai...sachhi meriyan akhan nam ho gayiyan padh ke...ese tra samaaj nu sedh dinde raho....mainu hamesha tuhadiyan likhtaan da intizaar rhega....god bless you

tusi bhaut sohna likhea g te darda nu bhaut wadia roop dita

but ik request ae k punjabi ch likhan d try karea kro

@simreet,davinder : thanks.............