|
|
 |
 |
 |
|
|
|
| Home > Communities > Punjabi Poetry > Forum > messages |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
sharan g ,te gurinder g is rachna nu apna kimti waqt dain lyi te is rachna nu pasand krn lyi tuhadi bahut bahut mehrbani .
|
|
16 Feb 2011
|
|
|
|
|
bhut vadhia lakhia tusi Rajwinder...keep it up....rab kare tusi apni kalam nal maa-boli de sevaa karde reho....God bless u....
|
|
20 Mar 2011
|
|
|
|
|
Good work !
Par mere mutabik 2ji satar ch "Shabd" di jagah "Akharr" zyada suitable hovega ! Akheer vich 'baaz' di jagah shayd 'ILL' hona chaheeda bcoz I think baaz moyian nu nahi khanda par ILL khandi hai ( But I am Not too sure about it as i am refering Mahan kosh for this , but will let you know the accurate Answer soon)
baki 2-4 sujhah hor vi san tuhadi kavita do body nu laike par gurez karanga ethe lok gal pai jande han lol...
jeeo !
|
|
20 Mar 2011
|
|
|
|
|
shukriya gursharan g ,te divroop g.........@divroop g tusi shi ho baaj nhi ill khandi hai moea nu.....te m nu shabad word jada shi lgea .salah den lyi shukriya .bt hun main word chnge nhi kr sakdi ithe. apni dairy ch jaroor kr lawangi .mehrbani tuhadi!
tusi jo sujhaah dena chaunde ho de sakde ho ......?
|
|
20 Mar 2011
|
|
|
|
|
MAi zaroor aap ji nu mail kar dianga kall takk ! Shukria ...
|
|
22 Mar 2011
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
jo bai divroop ne keha bilkul thek hai... mera mannna hai k jekar asi apni galti nahi savikarde ta asi kuj ni sikh sakde.. es lyi galtian v kaddanian chahidian ne par jan bujh k v galt ni kehna chahida.. galti hon te kise nu very gud kehna os naal sab to jyada beinsafi karna hai.. oh tuhada shubchintak nahi hovega jo tuhadi galti nu v changa kahega,,,kyu k rachna da myaar neevan ho janda...
|
|
02 May 2011
|
|
|
|
|
shukriya g aap sabh da!
@harinder g m tuhadi gal naal sehmat haan................ g ithe sirf sikhan lyi hi taan asi apnia posts sanjhe krde haan j koi gltian 10da hai taan sanu +ve hi lena chahida hai ....te divroop g ne vaise v m nu kuj sujah dite c through msg te m ne v ohna da shukriya kita c.......apne vichaar sanjhe krn lyi shukriya tuhada!
|
|
02 May 2011
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Pehla taan sry mai is rachna nu mis kar gya kmaal da likhea a tusi vadhayi de paatar ho , tusi apni klm di karagri da bahut hi sunder namuna pesh kita hai , likhde raho rab rakha
|
|
20 May 2011
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
Copyright © 2009 - punjabizm.com & kosey chanan sathh
|
