Divroop vir ji de sujhaava te gaur kareo ehna de sujhaa ik likhna sikhan wale lyi ghio da kam karde ne .p ehna de sujhaa kismat nal milde ne jioo

I think instead of ill or baaz the correct word is "girjh" "ਗਿਰਝ" (vulture).  They do feed on the dead animal's remains. 

On scientific/environmental point of view girjh jo ke ajjkal Punajb vich alop ho chukkiaa ne jaan haun valiaa ne, vatavarn nu saaf dakhan vich bahut maddad kardiaa san as they feed on the dead animal's remains.

Almost forget, nice one...

suhkriya minder g te arinder g apne sujah den lyi!

khoobsurat lines hn..par thodi mehant di lod hai...likhdey raho rajwinder..

bhut hi vadiay likhya g..nice one...

There we go ! Thats the perfect answer by Arinder ji ! I did thought about 'Girjh' after my messages on this post,but somehow it just slipped outa my mind ! This is really a good suggestion i guess ! Rajwinder ji please make sure you re-write 'girjh' in yer diary ..:) 

shukriya seema g te simar g.......@divroop g m ne rewrite kr leya hai c ........m di baar baar cutting krva rhe ho diary te ......:).thnx .

ਜਦ ਮੋਹ ਹੀ ਗਏ ਫੇਰ ਕੀਨੇ ਨੋਚਨਾ ਤੇ ਕੀਨੇ ਖਾਨਾ, ਫੇਰ ਤਾਂ ਓਹੀ ਜਾਣਦਾ ਜਿਦੇ ਕੋਲ ਜਾਣਾ,

ਜਦ ਮੋਹ ਹੀ ਗਏ ਫੇਰ ਕੀਨੇ ਨੋਚਨਾ ਤੇ ਕੀਨੇ ਖਾਨਾ, ਫੇਰ ਤਾਂ ਓਹੀ ਜਾਣਦਾ ਜਿਦੇ ਕੋਲ ਜਾਣਾ,

wah  wah sukhan g ...:)..gud reply!shukriya.....